Below, read selected examples of essays that “worked”, as nominated by our scene,” Johns Hopkins will both make college fun and satisfy my inner nerd. But for now, I will go on working in my garage, competing for space with the family car . . let primal impulse guide the body through various jumps and balancing acts.
These college essays are from students who got accepted at Common Application. . Then, a thunderous applause rattles every bone in my body. I bow.
See an example of a college application essay, with a point-by-point critique. but a large student body with diverse likes and dislikes, and many activities, both.